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The only thing I want is to be in love with you
to spend a lifetime just watching your mouth
speaking the words that captivate me

I only want to forget the world
forget everything I've ever known

The only thing I want is to be in love with you
to watch each day pass by like seconds
on a clock that never runs

I want to find myself in you
to become what I have longed for

you are my inspiration
though it seems
you're much
too much
I don't deserve it

I only want to feel your touch
the touch of an angel that guides me home when I am lost
and gives me love when I feel that I am hated

You are my guardian angel
You are my angel for life
perfect in every way
don't ever change


I love you...




I will always love you
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Really, there is a meaning to this poem. I'm sure the words within the piece could be changed, but I am quite satisfied with what I have at the moment. Who knows, maybe some day the words will change around a bit, but until then, I'll stick with this. Now, I mentioned before, there is a meaning to this poem. For a few days, I'd say, at least a week or two, I have been feeling very, I guess, loving. It sometimes seems that there is no one out there to give all my love to, but there is one person that I adore and that's who this poem is for, however, I will leave him anonymous, for personal reasons.

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Lynnae-Madison Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's sad I love it
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
This is a lovely poem, and I hope you find someone to love!:hug:
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lovemypunkin7 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice way to express your love to someone.
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.
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xXanimetenshiXx Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem is more real for me than anyone would know. I love this. It sings to me.
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. :)
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RandomDrawerPerson Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
I have a friend and we have been friends since we were little kids. He is like extended family. Thing is after all we've been through how do I tell him how I really feel about him? What if it ruins our bond? What if he feels the same? Help?
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Not sure how much help I can be. All I can say is you need to be honest with yourself and with him. If you have to, write about how you're feeling. Maybe this will help you sort things out. Good luck and I hope everything works out with you and your friend!

-Shae
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RandomDrawerPerson Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011
I know someone at school called shae. He's an annoying twat. But your nice and thank you. I'm gonna see him over the summer hols. I've tried to tell him before. But oh well. Wish me bravery.
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:) You can do it!
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RandomDrawerPerson Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
I can always try.
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JohnChristJohn Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
And sometime soon, I will share this with that one special woman, for truly I mean every word of this to her. Thank you so much for putting into words that which I can never get quiet right. ;)
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome... :D

...and thank you for your lovely comments.
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JohnChristJohn Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! If this were said of me... my heart would burst!
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gothicferret14 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011
I was on the brink of tears when I read this! This is beautiful, great job!
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :hug:
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gothicferret14 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
np. I'm in that situation right now as well :tighthug:
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ilovedeathnote24 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2010
this is sooooooooooooooo freakin intense i cryed and i hardly ever cry jk i cry ALOT
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
lol aww.. Thank you.
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ilovedeathnote24 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2010
my boyfriend is still crying
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TheLittlePsychopath Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2010  Student General Artist
Breathtakingly beautiful...
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much! :)
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TheLittlePsychopath Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2010  Student General Artist
You're welcome. :D
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beuk-d Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2010
beautifull!!!
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nightblade09665 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
hey thats real deep and very sweet
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snowraven0 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010  Student General Artist
The only thing I want is to be in love with you
to watch each day pass by like seconds
on a clock that never runs

my absolute favorite part..
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DariaIoana Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2010
i wish i love this way
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TravelingBlondie Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
wow. i love it. it has so much debth and its kinda one of those things that gave me that warm fuzzy feeling inside;). great job
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MasterJimmy92 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
omg love it!!!
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TackyloveApple Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pretty
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Amethystte Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010   General Artist
I could watch him just talk forever.

I'd give up everything just to have him.

I'll do anything for him to return my feelings.

He inspired me to be an artist again.

I don't deserve to even know someone as amazing as him.

That last hug he gave me before I had to leave, I'll treasure that forever.

When I got lost and had to get back to my grandpa, he showed me how to get there, and I ran, because he told me I should hurry, that my family was probably worried about me.

He says he's not as amazing as I say he is. That's not true. He's ten times more. He's perfect in every way.

I love him...

I will always love him...


And yet... he only sees me as a little girl with a crush.
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AnaCatharina Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
luuuvvveeddd it !!!! its beautiful and i can relate to this poem, its just how i feel about this boy, who doesn't even know i exist probably :/
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hugo4193 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
awesome
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks. :)
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hugo4193 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
no thanks for your pic
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
?
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hugo4193 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
what
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Midway6 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
wow i really like it
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm glad!
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Midway6 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
:)
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SuperMarios Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010   Interface Designer
i like the 3rd paragraph ;) did you wrote it ?
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Carana0 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2010  Student Writer
This makes my heart warm up... I just know that there is that special someone out there, for you and fo rme. :nod:
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Erzeal Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010
Beautiful...I love this...
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Seriah-Zauch Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010
very nice poem......
too bad i'm the school crazy or something stupid like that....
rumors say i had sex with someone just for 3 months of math homework.... i love math though....
...........i've never even had a first kiss......
screw life...
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Drama!!!

Glad you like the poem... :)
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Seriah-Zauch Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010
i hate drama.... i'm not even emotional, my family line literally has NO emotion, at least on my dad's side
lol, you don't have to listen to my crazy ramblings if you don't want, i just put my thoughts onto paper sometimes XP
my thoughts are usually pretty morbid.... DX
anyway, i hope you keep up the writing!! it's a great poem, really!
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Well thank you.
Feel free to ramble on. I do the same thing. :)
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Seriah-Zauch Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010
hurrah for rambling!
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shae2003 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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Seriah-Zauch Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010
:P
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